'How to' - first 10,000 words (rough)

Well, for those who'd like to have a read, here are the 1st 10,000 words of 'How to'. They're a bit rough ATM, I'm feeling so well, maybe I'm hallocinating, whatever...here they are. Any comment would be well received. Any bad comment won't be. Give it to Grisham.

http://authonomy.com/books/56673/how-to-build-a-castle-in-seven-easy-steps/