'Manna-X' (1st part) can now be read...:-)

So, I've finally put up the first 13,000 or so words of 'Manna-X' on authonomy.com.
It's still rough, needs a bit of work, but it's 'out there', you can read it and give some feedback!
Please tell me how you feel (if you get to the end of this first bit of the book) :-)

http://authonomy.com/books/50429/manna-x/