Wrote Weekend Quickie 22 with no 'be' verb. Perhaps I'll try that in 'How to', or at least cut them down.
http://theironwriter.com/weekend-quickie-21-2/
There's also Jasper's 'Dark Space' to download if you haven't done so already (I'm in 3rd place ATM)...
bit.ly/darkspace14
And entered a 53 word story competition, the element this month (February) is a 'palm tree', so I wrote a generic 53 worder, about a box, similiar to Elizabeth John's 'The Box' at that other site I won't mention :-)
Heritage
Two feet down in
the roots of the palm tree, his family's palm tree, there it was, the box.
"What's
that?" asked his wife, her hard, round belly shining in the sun.
He brushed off
the sand, checking the seal, still intact.
"Later,
later."
Satisfied, he buried
it back. For the next generation.
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