I finally got a comment about 'Man by a tree' which wasn't really to my liking, saying the beginning wasn't structured well, and too many heads are used. But that's the point of the book, really. The 2nd book is a 'wham bamm, thank you, ma'am', whereas the 1st is a book you have to delve into first, walking through the forest which is life until something 'cracks'. Yes, this isn't reader-friendly, but I wanted to write books which made people think. Apparently that's not so good, to make your readers think.
Perhaps I'll make a 'Man by a tree' - the 'Wham Bamm' version...just a bit of cutting and reshuffling....:-)
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