Two from YouWriteOn,com...
"I almost removed this assignment as I'm not usually into comedy, but
then started reading and became hooked, which must be a good sign. This
was an entertaining read, with a lot of well-judged humour. I like the
short chapters which keep the pace going."
"I have to commend you for your interpretation and wonderful imagination.
It is very refreshing to read a comical, escapism piece now and again....Your
style and expression was good, although I personally feel that it would
benefit from a little more descriptive, atmospheric explanation. This
would give so much more to your work. Enjoyed it. Thank you."
And a short one on authonomy.com...
Wow love it, so easy to get in to and love the short chapters, backed and highly stared."
Strange that some people love the short chapters and others hate them...